All Comments on 'Night Of Lust For A Small Woman Ch. 04'

Comments/feedback very much appreciated by the author.

Do you like stories of big young men vs small older women?

Yum.

continue this series excellent,please in the future it would be great to involve a 7 inch stilettos and sexy garters like you did and also some dressing in more young girls with sceam heels and langerie, it would be great also to involve the daughter in the series.

also if the son tries to enlarge his cock to 14 -16 inches that sound extremely sexy.

Excellent story.... One problem. Grammer is very stilted. Literotica has editors that will let a story FLOW. Once I got used to having to read over jerks in sentences, I really enjoyed the story.

This story has been fucking awesome to read. The grammer and spelling, as well as the order of some of your words, definitely needed some further editing, which by the way, I would be more than happy to assist you on, if you liked, for chapter 5...

Just let me know...

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No.

While I agree the whole thing is "over the top," I thought much of it was wonderfully erotic. It began to get rather repetitive in the final chapter. I would be happy to have more stories of Carol.