by Tara Cox
thang you another one of your very good stories look ing for another one this one ended so good
Proof that when you find the one (or more for some) you hold on with everything you are.
Beautiful story. Thank you x
Tess (UK)
Loved all 15 chapters , think you could expand this in many different derections and really hope you do. Please contact me if you need or would like some ideas. You write great stories.
Ashman and others,
I have continued this story in my Trouble Texas series that is running now. Those stories include: One Night Stand, Tight Fittin' Jeans, Ready to Run, and Goodbye Earl. All are entwined and appearing concurrently.
Tara, this may be the best work on Lit. Not only have you told an entertaining tale with wonderful characters and plot, but you have done something that is infinity harder. You have taken on the human problem of building stable relationships. You have shown a way to create a strong martial unit while the partners maintain their individuality. In doing so, you are trying to make your readers better people. That is what great fiction does
There are a few distractions, mostly caused by over reliance on spell check but easily fixed by a good copy editor. All in all excellent work. 10 stars if I could give them.