by Loomis
great story cant wait for part2 how about the girls go shoppin with him for some more sexy clothing (thigh high boots pvc dresses etc?)
I really liked your story, as I happened to read it in a interracial mood. Please do write Part 2 (and Parts 3,4,5...). Again, very good story.
This story has lots of great possibilities and with the oh-so-erotic fetishs of twins, asians, school girls, the budding sexuality of young women, and with an older man. It's like a whole bunch of fantasies wrapped into one story!
Shoot yes, I'd like a second story, though the story's basis could lead to far more than a single sequel.
Keep going! This could transform into my all time favorite. Keep it up. Great writing. Such detail!
Very hot without being too blatant. Stories that develop the characters are the best. This does it while having some very hot sex.
...the sexual possibilities are endless. They look like twins. 1 could work on him above the waist, the other below, SIMULTANEOUSLY! They could ride his mouth & cock. He could place them naked atop 1 another & fuck them both at the same time! Anally, orally, in their pussys, he could have a ball. Like I said, the erotic possibilities are ENDLESS!
It was so wonderful to meet you in the chat room last night. But then to see what you could write! WOW! I am shocked! I cant wait to read pt 2! woodlandpixie
Damn good story. Loved the lead up and the back round.