All Comments on 'Night With Twins Ch. 01'

by Loomis

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
hurry up with part 2

great story cant wait for part2 how about the girls go shoppin with him for some more sexy clothing (thigh high boots pvc dresses etc?)

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Fantastic Story

I really liked your story, as I happened to read it in a interracial mood. Please do write Part 2 (and Parts 3,4,5...). Again, very good story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Delightful story

This story has lots of great possibilities and with the oh-so-erotic fetishs of twins, asians, school girls, the budding sexuality of young women, and with an older man. It's like a whole bunch of fantasies wrapped into one story!

Shoot yes, I'd like a second story, though the story's basis could lead to far more than a single sequel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Fuckin Hot

Keep going! This could transform into my all time favorite. Keep it up. Great writing. Such detail!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Truth or Fantasy

Wonders if this is truth or fantasy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
more, more, more

Very hot without being too blatant. Stories that develop the characters are the best. This does it while having some very hot sex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
If you write pt 2(I hope you do...)

...the sexual possibilities are endless. They look like twins. 1 could work on him above the waist, the other below, SIMULTANEOUSLY! They could ride his mouth & cock. He could place them naked atop 1 another & fuck them both at the same time! Anally, orally, in their pussys, he could have a ball. Like I said, the erotic possibilities are ENDLESS!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
WOW!

It was so wonderful to meet you in the chat room last night. But then to see what you could write! WOW! I am shocked! I cant wait to read pt 2! woodlandpixie

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Love the story. Hope # 2 is even better

Damn good story. Loved the lead up and the back round.

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