by Loomis
really enjoyed the second part and cant wait for part three just dont make us wait so long!
get those girls out shoppin to it sounds like it would be a cool third part
Great story can't wait for the 3rd part of the story as well. please let me know when it come out.
Loved it...Masterful writing, and i liked the suspense techniques used. Look forward to seeing the 3rd part of the story published soon...Keep up the great work!^^
Loved the story. Can't wait for P3. The shopping bit could work well for the direction of the story.