All Comments on 'Night With Twins Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
keep up the good work

really enjoyed the second part and cant wait for part three just dont make us wait so long!

get those girls out shoppin to it sounds like it would be a cool third part

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Excellent

Beautiful work! I look forward to seeing the third installment.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Very Good

Great story can't wait for the 3rd part of the story as well. please let me know when it come out.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Great...^^

Loved it...Masterful writing, and i liked the suspense techniques used. Look forward to seeing the 3rd part of the story published soon...Keep up the great work!^^

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Great Story.

Loved the story. Can't wait for P3. The shopping bit could work well for the direction of the story.

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