All Comments on 'Nigkala Tales Pt. 01: On the Set'

This was okay for a start, but I couldn't give more than 3 stars, as there were too many unknowns. We could say we know the basics for Nigkala, things like she's seven foot three, has four breasts with nipples that get two inches long when erect, female and an actress. But she's obviously not human; or at least, not human as we know it. So is she an extraterrestrial, or an other-dimensional being (like an orc/ork), a GELF (genetically engineered life form) or what? Are they even on Earth as we know it now, or is it an alternate? Or is it a different world altogether? Others will say details like that don't matter, but they help me, personally, paint a better picture in my head of the world you've built and populated with your characters. If you're already working on chapter 2, you might want to give some thought to filling in a few of these details.

@Sorchak: She's completely human.

Just uploaded part 02 with her origin story.

Two inch nipples? I see stuff like this on here a lot, and I just don't understand it.

Is it just that some writers have no sense of measurement or female anatomy? Or are there really guys out there who love the idea of giant, floppy tubes of flesh for nipples?

Yep, two inches. I know it is excessive, but in-story, there is a reason.

Read the origin story (chapter 2) for the explanation. It is Sci-Fi, after all.