All Comments on 'Nikke's Modelling Debut'

That was a great and sensual build up to let her body make the decision. I loved reading it!

Nicely paced with the erotic tension ratcheting up to a very hot finish.

I would love to see a continuation of this story.

What a great story about my wife.

I took many nude pictures of my first wife, but it never got this exotic. What a smooth and exciting build-up to the climax. I wonder where the next chapter leads. The lovely lady has certainly found a new page in the story of her life as an uninhibited woman.

As a Amateur Photographer your insight was tastefully erratic . Hope to read more, if so could you ease her outside ? Just asking .

But then again, I love most of your work.

I found this very erotic.

hope there will be more to cum - maybe a full fledged gangbang or bukkake session for Nikke?

loved this, very erotic and just what i would love my wife to do or watch a woman being a subject of a pic session where this happens

Would love to read some more about my wife.....

If I had known my wife in her prime....

Very hot and beautifully written. Thanks.

For a "slippery slope" seduction genre there were a number of important elements that were missing. It made the story seem rushed and significantly improbable. Consider this barely average, worth no more than 3* stars.

great erotic story

Very hot. Just the type of read I like. You did well with presenting Nikke's reluctance and turning her to a willing participant. That is a tricky transition. I know it was time to end the story, but three people betrayed her at the end. That needed addressing, not just pushing past it.

Your lexicon in describing both the situation and the thoughts in the characters heads was excellent. There were a few grammatical issues and on two occasions the wrong name was used. I almost never give a "5." I am a writer myself so I strive for perfection. But this story was well developed, with believable characters, and a whole lot of heat! This is a "5!" Thanks, Will Harty

As the husband of this wife, i would love a follow up....

If the pictures were paintings and drawings rather than photographs, this would have been my wife.