by Bacigalupo
Very well done. Loved the last line, its a real clincher. I enjoyed the same things that you wrote about, very very well done.
You've definitely got the balance right between control (who's controlling whom?) and affection. That was subtle and non-gratuitous. It's tough to find on here sometimes, so commendations and all. The last line's put a smile on my face that I'll not be able to explain to my friends. Cheers
I read the whole thing with a wicked sense of anticipation. Until the last line...and I smiled...relieved and satisfied. Very nice.