All Comments on 'Ning Ch. 02'

this story is terrible. no real action to speak of

The reason the other person who left a comment was annon was that he didnt want anyone to know that he is a 30 sec man. It takes time to please a woman and some things shouldnt be rushed. I hope you write more and dont let the wramblings of a fool upset you.

good job! please write more

I was slightly pu off by the hint of violence, but she seems to like it. It might be continued with him being very loving and protective and making her pregnant.

i cant wait for the story to continue...keep up the good work...

hated it. painfully stereotyped, hypersexualized racial characterizations. horrible.

I wish you had allowed Grampa to pray away her virginity with his prayer stick!