All Comments on 'Ning Ch. 02'

I wish you had allowed Grampa to pray away her virginity with his prayer stick!

hated it. painfully stereotyped, hypersexualized racial characterizations. horrible.

i cant wait for the story to continue...keep up the good work...

I was slightly pu off by the hint of violence, but she seems to like it. It might be continued with him being very loving and protective and making her pregnant.

good job! please write more

The reason the other person who left a comment was annon was that he didnt want anyone to know that he is a 30 sec man. It takes time to please a woman and some things shouldnt be rushed. I hope you write more and dont let the wramblings of a fool upset you.

this story is terrible. no real action to speak of