All Comments on 'No Escape Ch. 03'

Nice enough start though it took 3 chapters. I had to look up what Yandere means but now that I know ok I'm on-board. I'm hoping to see some things here since James will be shamed or embarrassed:

Suspicious death, not due to Sophies's doing if you are ending in James' genuine submission or acceptance

OR if you are going horror kill away. Sophie the psycho, keeping her promise.

Either way, need I say you need to have an incest baby. Good ending or blackmail tool

You've dragged the reluctant brother trope along way too far for the story to be enjoyable any longer. It has becoming annoyingly tiresome and totally unbelievable.

Back thru the memory warehouse to a song by Stills 'love the one you're with', damn it if that song is utter sheize..

You can't help who you love. Love is precious!

No wonder this submission is not followed closely, Damn, 6 + months since the last part spells doom!

Get with it Zamairiac, if you are serious of making it on Lit, put some effort into it!

@muskyboy. Then stop reading it darling ;)

So basically this is a dominant revenge game that the sister is playing to ruin the brother

1⭐️ series

Really enjoying the story so far.

Keep it going and don't mind haters

This is a unique plot and very well told.

Pretty good story you got going on here. Unlike some others, I think the reluctantness of the brother is very reasonable and realistic. Most brothers wouldn't immediately go along with their sister's declaration of romantic love. And the brother not being reluctant would kinda defeat the purpose of the yandere trope, since you wouldn't really be able to show the level of obsessiveness the yandere has. Anyway, good story 7/10, excited for the next part.

Love the story so far! Would be a amazing ending if when the sister finds her brother she "rapes" him and forces him to love her! But honestly enjoying the writing as it builds so please keep going! Im rooting for you and the story

Man this is some crazy ass bitch, looking forward

Damn what a crazy bitch.

Snarky comment aside, continue making these OP!

MORE PLEASE MORE! wonderful writing great read . I've always been drawn to the broken ones. if needed i will beg!

Hot!!!

Holy shit I didn't expect Sophie to be this batshit crazy, definitely caught me off guard

This is incredibly chilling

Dude you probably could’ve put this under Erotic Horror. That ending definitely fit the bill ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️