All Comments on 'No More Blinders'

Good story, you going to finish it?

Felt like the story was rushed, just an outline of a story.

Good story, but needs more. Hope author finishes it.

Never try to fuck over the quite guy, he'll get payback in the end, just like this MC did. Good story and great ending.

Starting the guys dick on fire is a good moment

How does she get from him not wanting other women, and PLAYING at bondage, to thinking that he'd be a willing cuck? Why does she think that he knows about her cheating?

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"Once my lawyer assured me that I couldn't be tried again for the battery" - Of course he can be tried "again," he hasn't been tried once yet.

Great story, loved it. A solid 4 stars.

Just a hunk, a hunk of burning love

As Jerry Lee Lewis would say, “Great balls of fire!”

Amusing. Though I feel that there wasn't enough pain and suffering for the ex-wife. Hopefully Bill will have lasting problems/memories.

The wife's effort to humiliate him by bringing Bill to the house and fucking him in their bed is totally inconsistent with her personality at the beginning of the story. Her statement that she did not want their marriage is also out out of character with her blatant effort to humiliate him. Can't have you cake and eat it too.

Pompous twaddle, IMHO!

Thanks for a well-written and fun read!! Good job!

One of my favorite lines on all of Lit:

"I accidentally set his genitals on fire."

lol

How’s the Flambé kid? THAT’S funny! 5 stars DMW aka Sumnut96

Beware of the quiet one. He may have more fire in him than you think.

This didn’t bear the quality of your other work. It was disjointed.

5 years, and only one comment pointed out the use of names from Atlas Shrugged, by Ayn Rand. Well, here’s another thumbs up! Perfect use, matching the names to the characters.

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ZK