All Comments on 'No More Charity'

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MaonaighMaonaighover 3 years ago
Love, action, drama...

...what more could we ask for? You've got it all here, Sandy, and the result is a very satisfying story. A very polished five-star offering you can be proud of.

BillyslateBillyslateover 3 years ago

Beautifully Written!!

A quite nice and dramatic story, with a profoundly heartwarming ending. Now Faith-Hope-Destiny-Mum-Ellen can enjoy their lives together, possibly with "another little one" joining them in the future🎉!!!!

Definitely 5*-Stars!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

a very sweat story with some drama i enjoy seeing your name come up i tend to smile it means i have something to read a fan shayne

JoeybagofdonutsJoeybagofdonutsover 3 years ago
Very sweet and heartwarming

Thank you for continuing this story from part one.

Thanks for bringing us into your fantasy world.

Joey.

LoveliquorLoveliquorover 3 years ago

Beautiful and sensuous and well written. I look forward to reading more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

It is always good to see beauty grow from destruction, proving that pain is not final and love is infinite.

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyover 3 years ago
Fabulous

Love story with a dramatic break and glorious ending ..... Wonderful

PraetusPraetusalmost 3 years ago

Lovely story though Hopes reaction was actually rather upsetting.... albeit VERY understandable.

Faith showed a lot of patience and kindness there. True love.

Beautiful story.

MICHAELG1963MICHAELG1963about 2 years ago

just a wonderful awesome story. Faith, Hope, Ellen and Mum what a wonderful home so full I f Love

ca_daveca_davealmost 2 years ago

Well done. Sandy you are so talented. 5* thank you.

Nicole2023Nicole2023almost 2 years ago

Loved it glad the death was not a main character

Roti8211Chanai643Roti8211Chanai6437 months ago

A really good sequel!

Had pretty much everything, happiness, action, drama, a happy ending and lots of love.

What more could be needed in a great story!

Thank you

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Thanks to those who have rated and commented on my work. I self-edit, juse Grammarly and reread my stories many times but still, errors slip through - I apologise for that and hope that it doesn't distract too much. Recommended reading order: Milly Scott 0 - The New Assista...