All Comments on 'No More Control Ch. 01'

Good start! More please!:)

Hope you continue the story as you have time and inclination.

More a teaser than a story. No real plot beyond what fills one short sentence, no real story told. Incomplete. But teasing it does really, really well.

If writing quality level is maintained I don't mind installments on the short side. Take Your time and continue to surprise and entice.