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trixforeveryoneabout 7 years agoLiked it, but the sex seemed rushed at the end.
I think it would be a stronger story if you lingered more over what Mark is feeling and thinking during the actual sex.
Lamentationabout 7 years agoNice
I grew up in and around Concord, CA so that detail was a really cool. I look forward to seeing more of this story :)
DianeRedfernabout 7 years agoSo sweet, gentle, and lovjng
But even with the slow hand, he came in a heated rush. But he didn't go. He stayed. So the Pointer Sisters won't be upset with you.
Loved it!
xoxo,
Di
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