All Comments on 'No More Sorrow'

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DianeRedfernDianeRedfernabout 7 years ago
So sweet, gentle, and lovjng

But even with the slow hand, he came in a heated rush. But he didn't go. He stayed. So the Pointer Sisters won't be upset with you.

Loved it!

xoxo,

Di

LamentationLamentationabout 7 years ago
Nice

I grew up in and around Concord, CA so that detail was a really cool. I look forward to seeing more of this story :)

trixforeveryonetrixforeveryoneabout 7 years ago
Liked it, but the sex seemed rushed at the end.

I think it would be a stronger story if you lingered more over what Mark is feeling and thinking during the actual sex.

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