All Comments on 'No More "What if"'

by Capitalist28

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good job

Didnt read the story yet , will do so tomorrow,this was my angle for a story, you beat me to it.a story so many what ifs in our lives, guess i will have to do a differant slant.thanks the who Chicago

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
julie

has either been cheating on him for YEARS, or is religiously indoctrinated to hate sex.

Either way it was a good move to leave her. this was a nice little story.

BoxcarbillBoxcarbillover 5 years ago
Yes.

Church can be so ingrained that a woman can deeply believe that sex is only for Procreation. I was married to one 20 years. Only after we split did she let go and enjoy it. Too Late, I had moved on. Well written story.

Capitalist28Capitalist28over 5 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thanks for your comments. Glad you enjoyed it!

Rancher46Rancher46over 2 years ago

Really enjoyed this story, I was glad the author brought Jake and Bronwyn to together to find that their what if was a second chance of love. Well written and good character development.

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