No One Wants Me

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I don't deserve any better.
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Editor's note: this fictional work contains scenes of completely fictional mind control, rough, reluctant, dubiously consensual, consensually non-consensual (CNC), or non-consensual sex or scenarios.


Originally published on reddit January 20, 2022 in my now-banned profile u/Mercedene_Morghon. Script by u/kudont.

[F4M] No One Wants Me [CNC][fsub][Tomboy][Taking Advantage][Heartbroken][Rough][Huge Cock][Forced Kissing][l-Bombs][Facefuck][Doggystyle][Creampie][Hair Pulling][Toxic][Self-Degradation][Self-Hatred][Ugly Bastard][Abusive Relationship][Anything for Love]

I don't deserve any better.

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Performer and all characters depicted are +18. This audio is fantasy made exclusively for adults by adults. This audio should not be re-posted or uploaded to any other platform without explicit consent.

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Note: I'm so happy my first post here was published (and a kind anonymous person liked it)! All right, Mercy lives on literotica now. Screw reddit and their continuous bans.

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AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Awesome Mercy loved it !

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

By now you must realize you're dealing with a different type of audience than what you're used to over at Reddit. All your Reddit fans can follow you over and boost your initial ratings, but if you really want to succeed at Literotica, where the competition is focused and fierce, you should consider doing a few things.

First, consider hiring some voice actors. Your one person show is going to get old quick over here.

Second, up your writing. Mentioning big dicks every chance you get, believe or not, is a one trick pony. How many times can your female character's gasp at that monster cock? The world is full of different sizes, and your audience is all too aware of that. Just having a different cock shoved in them can be just as traumatic to your victims as one that always seems to be the size of King Kong's.

Third, characters begging for their lives is a potentially hot concept, but only if you actually kill some of them off occasionally. Your bog story was a promising start, but it would have been a thousand times hotter if listeners could have actually heard the victim whimpering as she sank.

Fourth, as you may be discovering, you need to clearly mark your audio stories so listeners know what to expect. Literotica has categories that cover almost anything artists can dream up. Take those categories seriously when uploading your stories.

Finally, don't take it personally if some of your work gets returned to you unpublished. The reasons for that won't always be clear. You can choose to work with volunteer editors, or re-edit on your own, but sooner or later something you think is perfectly fine WILL be sent back!

Anyway, that's my unsolicited advice. I've been a member of this community for twelve years, and have published stories similar in nature to some of yours. This is the absolute premier site for all things erotic on a worldwide scale. You certainly have talent, there's no doubt about that. Now let's see if you can up your game.

Welcome to the Big League!

RoboButtonsRoboButtons3 months ago

Bravo? Incredibly disturbing content that likely hits a very sweet spot for fans of non-consent/reluctance stories. Fantastic performance. You've got an alluringly pitiful voice (mean that as a compliment). The audio quality itself is better than many other pieces on this site. Highly erotic and ethically dubious. I'll be anticipating your future recordings.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

How is this supposed to be a turn on?? I can see why Reddit banned your ass.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Jesus Christ you really should have a Rape Warning or SOME kind of warning in one of your tags/catagories. Because this s—t is absolutely not ok, made up or not. Record and post it if you must (which you really don’t) but put a WARNING label on it.

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