All Comments on 'No Ordinary Proposal Ch. 05'

I'm torn, kiss me Kate is my favorite. A love story for the ages. This is building to be another, while being a heartbreaker. I commend the work. While dreading some. Fictional souls passing so the others can live / love on. Ugh.

with the first comment. Kiss Me Cate was my favorite too but this story is right up there as well. The two stories are quite different in some ways but I like the way you write about the relationships and the environment in which they occur. I'm very engaged in these stories. I'm sure there is much more to come in this series!

A great dream girl romance. It includes just enough sex to make it provocative without it becoming a stroke story. It is very erotic as well as being romantic. A 5 Star Rating.

You're doing great! PLEASE continue!

@youngbrainoldbody I posted it, just waiting for it to be published, hopefully another day or two. Thank you for taking the time to comment!

Looks like she's going to find Scott dead..

I think there could be some more about their Hotel time - bathroom foto shot, planned dinner...