by podga
there is this aspect of your writing that seems to move me everytime. even if you're writing about the simplest things. Looking forward to the next chapter!
I just want to knock their heads together! Great job so far, I can't wait for the next chapter.
I like that the passion wasn't perfect, like a movie, but real and fumbling and unsure and overwhelming. Like Benny, I don't know what to make of Matt. Their next interaction should be fascinating. Hope we get it soon!
The image of greedy teenagers will stay with me tonight. Thanks... I think I'm gonna end up reading most of your work today. Its that good!