All Comments on 'No Problem Sis'

No interpersonal build up at all. Still seemed like only 1/2 a story?

End of story? Kind of good but very short.

I have to agree with the previous comments. It was good, but far too short.

Hopefully there's a part two so we can see more of them.

Thanks for the feedback, I am writing more of the experiences but do not wish to embelish them. These are genuine events from my past which I am writing as I recall them. If they are short, it is because the event was short. I am however very new to writing and will attempt to take on the advice. My next experience with my sister, for example, I am building our characters more, describing our appearances etc. Hopefully they will improve over time (this is only my third attempt at writing).