All Comments on 'No Regrets'

by KaiLancaster

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Needs a “Part Two”

Nice read. Quick. Good detail. Could could do a series if short stories about these two guys.

GybbsGybbsover 5 years ago
agreed!

While I thoroughly enjoy brief one-offs, I think Anonymous has a point - another episode with these two gentlemen would be hot. But I understand what makes this a good one-time story: I'm working with someone right now who will be leaving - and I probably won't tell him how I really feel about him until it's time for him to go (though at this point he's probably got me figured out). Yeah, I'm a wuss. But I don't want to jeopardize a good working relationship, and a deepening friendship.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Don’t stop there

Need more. Need to know how Michael processed this. After all, he didn’t fight back. He didn’t scream “faggot! Get the fuck away from me!” This isn’t finished, and it had a good start. Me thinks Michael has some feelings, too.

CorjixCorjixover 5 years ago
No One Is Perfect

This is not a 'gotcha' comment...liked the story; and would have liked the flow of it better if you had proof-read before publishing. I read mine four or five times and still slip up. I do catch most of the obvious ones, though...and you should too. Thanks - looking forward to more offerings from you. Good read - No Regrets!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Oh yes, Part Two

This is the end of the freshman year? Let them return for the second year, and resume their relationship. Maybe phone or text or email each other over the summer break. I agree that Michael probably has awakened some feelings he didn't know he had! Loved the descriptions -- the lightly haired pecs, the denser hair on the abs, the delicious cock that so far has only been imagined!

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