by city_bird
I've enjoyed both of your stories so far but this is my favourite as I'm such a tart for cute boy vamps. *grin* I love your characters' voices, they're very well written and the sex scenes are delicious. I look forward to more.
This was a good story.
I think the quality of writing in your second story, Aiden, was much better. However, this is certainly a good first submission. I hope to read more of your work.
A big ditto to Sadie's comment. Great future for you if you keep it up.......