by NurseSally
I can't wait for more! I'm not a proof reader so I have nothing to criticize. I just really enjoy your story and can't wait for more. The whole thing appeals to me on so many levels ! So please don't keep us waiting and keep up the excellent work! I would have rated it a 5 but it's not finished yet...
Thank you.
Sincerely Mike
I'm sure Dale will be living his fantasy soon, and suspect the other three won't be disappointed either. I like the way your story builds up slowly and keeps the reader anticipating more and more. Hope the next chapter arrives soon. You get my vote of 5 hard cocks for sure.
im not going to criticize u or your style of writing/grammatical errors etc. i love the story line, i could have easily been a participant in the hot tub. it made me cum hard and thats the point right? hurry for the next chapters....please!
You are one of my favorite authors on this site and i am glad you are still contributing stories....Please bless us with more of your submissions because each one is a gift to read...by the way,"The doctor is in"series is one of the best incest stories ever written and should go down in the Hall of Fame!!
Your story is very hot, I'm anxious to read what happens next. This is my favorite type of story, the kind that get me worked up.
I'm very interested to read where it goes from here. Will there be unusual erotic twists that aren't already given away in the prenopsis?
So glad to see a new story from Nurse Sally. Can't wait for the next part.
Can't wait to read next chapter. Thanks for such a good story.
A very solid opening to the story, with some good character develpment, realistic dialogue and an engaging plot. Nursesally has earned her fanbase.