All Comments on 'No Reservation'

"Sarah didn't like it one bit. She shuttered." Was she covering a window with boards? Should be 'shuddered.'

but it was a genuinely scary and erotic Halloween story. It had an original plot and I thought the dialogue was good. The characters were fleshed out and there were enough odd things going on that it kept my interest.

Good first time story, and good luck in the Halloween contest.