by aspiringromantic
Well done.I am always on the lookout for a sexual vixen as you described..
Overall it was fun read. You had a few typos but aside from that it was good. "Harder than than the boulders" that line made me chuckle.
Good build up, nice plotting. A little sad she didn't have more feelings, even if it made the whole story seem more real. Not much potential for a follow on...still a fine read!