All Comments on '(No) Strings Attached Ch. 01'

Ughhh!! I absolutely love all your stories!! I was so excited to see this one! And sure enough I get to the end and am wishing there were more chapters!! I can’t wait to read more!!

Great start!

Great start, Ms. Moon! Hopefully the follow-up is coming quickly.

No two ways about it. Her writing is so good, and feels so natural, that it conceals from the reader how really hard it is to write so well. Not everything is spelled-out, but everything is clear. Her dialogue never makes you go, "people don't talk like that!"

And the stories she weaves are always compelling. This one will be a pleasure to follow along with--I'm looking forward to the rest of the ride!

Thanks, ohio

No one on this site makes me feel the character like you do. Another outstanding story.

Love it, can't wait to read more!

GITM writes real dialogue and thoughts. Maybe the best at this on the site. Thanks!

to read you. Someone else said you're about the best on here at dialogue, and I heartily agree. I don't usually comment on first chapters, but had to say how glad I am you participated in the event. Thank you for writing and posting.

GA

Please, oh please, write more. Twice a year is NOT enough. You are the BEST. Thank you.

A really great beginning to what I hope is a cool story. Thank you so much.

Interesting to be put inside a girls head and see it from her point of view. Having said that, as a guy, I wouldn’t have gotten in the damn Jeep with a smoker or someone I didn’t like, much less both.

Call me psychic, but I have a hunch where this is going. I always enjoy GITM stories a lot, so I can't wait to see it actually happen. Excellent, as always.

Loved this story! Can’t wait for chapter two!

Until the next part!

Starting out as a beautiful Romance Story, with Claire & Liam destined to fall in love. As Claire stated "good, friendly no relationship sex with Liam",

What Could Go Wrong????????

5*-Star Rated Introduction!!

This was a great intro and I can’t wait for the next chapter!

Dead of Night is just the best. And even though it feels fresh, I’m always a bit reminded of great early triphop, like Massive Attack. Like Dissolved Girl:

‘Passion’s overrated anyway’

Good story.

Still waiting.. ;)

I think it is good writing but being a little depressed myself I need a little more stimulation and I don't mean sex. Maybe a little, love or hate or retribution for getting dumped, I don't know what I want. Just ignore me and keep writing.

Completion would be nice

That's it?

There's more, right?

It's so good...why would you stop???

Good premise.

All buildup, but nice buildup.

Five stars.

Great start. Interesting situation with equally complex characters. Five stars!

Claire’s time in the shower left me with the impression that her body is like a finely tuned grand piano. I hope Liam can play more than chopsticks, the lucky dog. Maybe something by

Jerry Lee Lewis.