by sexysassyme
So shocking but I stil love the story and the surprising twistes
if she is going to play in their game. It was just a bit rude how Carlos just took it upon himself to put her on display. But I cant wait to see what happens next.
don't let Mia end up enjoying all the shit that spewed out of karims mouth, oh my goodness, let this story be whr the man succumbs not the woman.
Please ad more to the story. I am loving what you have done so far. Look forward to see how it ends.
how long are you going to keep us waiting for the rest of the story? this stopping and starting is annoying. especially for those who keep checking for updates. I love the story please finish it
If there's anyone out there...
I've been reading stories on Lit for years and nothing frustrated/frustrates me more than authors who do not finish their stories. And now it seems that I am one of those dreadful unfinisher people that I once stood in judgement of. ;)
Chapter 5 has been partially written for a very long time, but I've just been struggling to know how to end it. However, no matter what I promise I will finish this story!
SSM