All Comments on 'Noah gives Mother Swimming Lessons'

Nice story. Hope there is a Chapter 2.

Is there a Chapter 3 planned for Glory Hole?

That was going great the story was working well then I don’t was you board of the story or not on this planet but you just literally killed the story you had tons of ideas but you just put the proverbial knife in the heart of the great story and just killed it why it’s a son and mother thing not add the pool boy thing at the end you basically killed your story the story was about intimacy between mother and son not let’s add the pool boy into it and kill this (was to be fantastic) story 😔😔

Nice progression of interactions. Each time mom didn't stop him it got more sensual.

you just spoiled it at the end by bringing the pool boy...

really nicely done with pace and stuff. i probably would have made it shorter as i have no will power to prolong what my second brain wants to do. and the dating other people isnt my angle either. but to each their own. good story, well written and original to boot. kudos

Enjoyable build up. Definitely should develop the dynamic further with the son taking full control over his mother’s outfits and sex life.

Loved the story. I hope that there will be a followup chapter.

Swimming lessons, nice way to go. A little more graphic detail would go a long way. And if there is a part two, maybe bring in the aunt. You've already laid the groundwork in this story, it would be easy to do.

The story was well done, you took your time getting to the sex. It looked like

things were going ok, but now GARY(the pool guy) shows up and MOM says to

NOAH. I can take on both of you. THANKS

Shame to spoil the story with the ending. Something seems so wrong about her having another man.

I liked this story for its honestly. The mom wasn’t a MILF that turned heads everywhere she went, and the son wasn’t a seasoned cocksman with a slab of meat hanging between his legs. It was cute how the mom kept up the lessons rouse as a means of denial about the illegal and depraved acts she was committing with her flesh & blood. Gave it 5*s, even though after honestly describing your average (but more than adequate) cock, you also described being halfway down her throat. The math didn’t add up!

A woman who is sexual enough to let her son fuck her will also be sexual enough to want even more cock. I think the ending is great and you need to make the son have to try harder to become the dominant cock in her life.

Don't worry, there's enough for both of you. This ruined this story for me.

What a complete buzz kill that ending was. Ruined the entire story for me.

shes...shes...making him share...with a old fat pool dude...gross and dumb. like the other anon freakin buzz kill ending. waah waah.

pool dude lasts 1 date. probably packing a baby carrot, if you can find it.

la historia iba muy bien pero el final es una mierda a ningún hombre de verdad le gusta compartir

The date with pool guy was not needed when she had such son , the dating ruined it

The date with the pool guy ruined it for me

Loved this story!!!

Drop the pool guy, wrecked the whole story

Anyone that's actually had (or tried to have) sex in a pool will tell you the primary result is washing away all the woman's natural juices and water is NOT a good lube for sex. It ends up being painful for her, and sometimes for both parties. Would have been a LOT more realistic if they had gotten out of the pool first, and he'd either gone down on her or fingered her until she got naturally wet again.

Yes, alas the pool guy insert just killed the loving aspect of the storyline.

I liked your story. The build up was nice and slow. Baking soda and soda ash can help the PH of swim pools so you can continue to use it even if it's a little green. 5 BIG ASS STARS!