All Comments on 'Noah's Starship Ch. 03'

There's something really endearing about the way that you write Navid's character. Just the way he talks/the way it's typed, and just the personality he has in general. I'm a big fan. I'm also really pleased to see that he is opening up more.

I'm glad you've continued to post this story on here. It is undoubtedly my favourite story on here right now, I'm absolutely hooked. Look forward to more!

While not everyone seems to agree with the relationship I am certainly thrilled you realize we all love your writing style. I am also pleased to see Noah sticking up for himself and gently showing Navid alternative ways to think of gay relationships. My guess is that cultural differences won't allow for a happily together forever. But there is love and you are doing a wonderful job portraying it. Because this is autobiographical that must be hard. Great job!

It's a wonderful piece -- and I hope you're basking in the affirmation of the comments. Noah/Naveed is all about love, and it will endure.

Will Navid ever suck Noah's cock? Just for reciprocity if nothing else? The love can't be all one-sided. For their sakes, I hope Navid will be true to Noah, because Noah loves him so. Give them a chance, please!

Ah I'm glad Noah addressed their relationship and their future, I'm disheartened Navid is making promises to Noah's father of taking care of him when he knows how it ends but it is what it is I guess. I'm also happy Navid is trying to stop addressing Noah as his princess, I now understand the thought behind it but it's a bit archaic seeing as Noah is a man himself