All Comments on 'Noah's Starship Ch. 04'

I very much enjoy this and all of your stories. Thank you for sharing them with us.

I was glad to see the next part of this story up this morning. I love Noah and Navid. Their story is so sweet. Thanks for sharing.

Lucinda

oh my spirits this is a grate story hope there's more to come

I like both Noah and Navid, but am disturbed by the systematic removal of Noah's freedom one step at a time.

The phone apps were the final straw for my "understanding" of Navid's need to be traditional. I fully expect that he will Noah anonymously hidden as his Princess in a Burqua before much more time goes by.

Being in love with a Homphobe is never good, especially when they are a Gay one.

It's not bad. It's like the find your friends app. It lets us know where each other is without having to text all the time. It's not just him tracking me. He travels a lot around town on business and it is helpful for me to see when he is going to be home and if there's traffic or whatever. And if our phones get stolen we can track them down.

He can see when I'm at the gym or back at home. I don't think it's a bad thing to care about where your partner is. It's funny. I never thought my relationship was that weird until I started writing about it.

But thanks for your input though. I guess we just see it differently.

It's a beautiful story.

I always knew being in love is one of the most beautiful thing but to know that this story is real made it incredibly enchanting.

I am from one of those country where being gay is treated worst then a disease so I can very well understand David's position.

No love story is strange or normal, as long as it is a happy one they are all beautiful.

I hope you continue on with your fairytale :-)

Emri, I can't wait for the next chapter. Love it. Thank you so very much for your story.

Navid is extremely controlling of Noah - it's a little scary. He can now track Noah wherever he goes, he wants to pull him out of school, he won't let him work - NOT a good relationship.

My partner and I have a similar app. I love it. We check on each other all the time. And it's nice to know when he is coming home from a job without constantly texting him. He also keeps tabs on me while I'm traveling. We both worry less.

I have to agree with everyone, that you have outdone yourself on this story. It is getting better as you go. Please keep writing for it is an interesting saga you have going on. I look forward to each chapter that comes out. Will be waiting for the next.

ACLASSYLADY

I 100% disagree with the previous commenter who said Navid was an abusive partner. Having a dominating and over protetive boyfriend is so hot! 100% turn-on than a lousy one. And also I Love Navid! The author never mentioned his religion but I think he's a muslim and I love it! I'm a muslim and I can relate to it too much, we also have a bit similarity in culture. Unlike Navid, my family, my relatves, my neighborhood knew I am gay and they love me. They respect my decisions and opinions. I hope his family will be like that too. Keep it up! Best story!!!

I love their relationship.

Navid and Noah are revealing more and more about their lives, and by doing this, moving closer to each other. There should be no secrets. And fully understanding each other might bring them to fully FULLY loving each other. I'm still thinking that Navid needs to love Noah by sucking his cock as Noah sucks his cock. There should be no barriers between them! Tasting Noah's seed might be just what Navid needs to share completely.

Oh for the love of god how much more control do Navid and Noah's father need to have over his life? He can't tutor because Navid and daddy dear say so. He has to potentially move away from everyone he loves and knows for Navid. Na is now wants to track his every move. Jesus H Christ, maybe you think this is normal because you were so naive when you got into the relationship but my god what a controlling ass.

Oh and also it's not his 'culture' it's his religion that's messed up. As an ex Muslim who's seen the atrocities of these countries the excuses Navid uses just piss me off. He's in a gay relationship, drinks, sex outside of marriage, hardly a Muslim is he? Oh and this nonsense about him not touching Noah's dick is insane. Also him being the supposed strong one and Noah being weak is also shit, not letting Noah speak for himself or eat for himself. He's in America now not Iran. Maybe he should act like it.

I don't know why this story pisses me off so much, maybe it's the glamorisation of cultures/religions that would literally have your fucking head for being you.