All Comments on 'Noah's Starship Ch. 20'

It's always a good day when you update this story. I'm always looking for an update from you no matter what story it is so I check both sites your on.

I was looking forward to the next chapter in this wonderful story and it was every bit as satisfying as I had hoped for. You have shared that this is somewhat autobiographic; I marvel at your maturity and insight. Best wishes.

I'm glad Noah said no to adoption. He infantilizes himself more than Navid does and it's getting old. He sounds whiny which would stop if he learned to be assertive instead of being victim-y. I'm sad because I think Navid's parents are going to cut them out of their lives and that will be heartbreaking for both of them, especially if his parents never come to accept them.

When Navid spoke Persian to Noah while making love it made my heart smile. So much love between these two.

I'm on summer break and I was able to relax and enjoy all 20 chapters. I hope there is at least one more chapter detailing their marriage and the starting of their family.Thanks for the wonderful story!

I'm sure happy they've progressed this far despite initial reservation from Navid about his family. He really loves Noah it's beautiful