by AddictedWombat
Its obvious they love each other deep down and maybe beyond that their is some sexuality too. They could push alittle harder and get into hotter territory. That might unleash sych arousing feelings; they'd go somewhere else with many hot consequences ?? Mabye that's what they need or want. Hopefully, the next chapter will bring more out. Thanks !!
Believable, no corny dialogue, I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm sure there are those who are looking only for as much sex as they can get as quickly as they can get it. I prefer a good story, preferably one that touches the heart as well as excites. You're off to a very good start.
I wont waste time, so ill just say the previous 2 comments were right on the money. You have a natural talent for this type of writing so keep going. Only please wrap THIS story up in 2-3 more pages but no more than that,Doesnt need any more setup so continue in the same mood of ch.1&2
im enjoying the story but where is part three, you cant just leave us hanging like this, come on, more please.
Please don't torture us anymore. Give a part three in. Put the sex. You'll get the attention this story deserves. Just don't take much time!
It's amazing. But please write the next part fast. Eagerly waiting for it.
cliffhanger?
please go on. Story is excellent. Love the romance and development of feelings. Best romantic story on the site hands down.
like thiswith hot sibling romance and erotica needs more chapter .....bring it on please