All Comments on 'Noises Through the Wall Pt. 09-10'

Great ending to a great story. Though I'm a bit confused why this last chapter was in this category.

The bi stuff ruined this way back and this didn't fix that, sadly.

This is the end of Noises I'll start posting a new story in four weeks. I post one chapter a week on Literotica, alternating between four different stories. That will continue. In the meantime, if you want to read all my stories or support my writing, visit rawlyrawls.com

Such a great story, sad it’s over

Mixed feelings about the way it turned out. By the way, will you complete Enki's Puzzle. Really like that story

Wild and crazy, wow. Very well written and full of hot mating. You covered all of the bases with this story, it didn't slow down from the start. Thank you for writing, it's much appreciated 👍

Had to go with dislike on this set. It really got away from the mom/son and introduced a foreign entity.

bad ending.

the mom fell for the ex-girlfreind ? unbelievable. especially since the only times they had together were for sex.

frankly you made none of the characters even remotely likable by the end of this and any so called relationships they have with each other a sham and joke.

Well the pregnancy was totally stupid. First they should have told Gwen no sex without a condom. Then if she wouldn’t give in, mom should have gotten a supply of morning after pills. (This was written in 2020 & 2021 when they were universally available.)

Especially after the two women had sex, I can’t see that the kids didn’t get together again. Dumb!

That said I had to rate every part 5 stars. 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

Bill S.

Excellent. An arousing, cohesive story. Did you take some significant leaps that might call for a suspension of disbelief? Sure. But it's a fantasy, and the story was told at such an exhilarating pace that it was perfectly fine to get from A to B to E without explaining everything along the way. Mom's fall from grace, blackmail into deeper disgrace, and subsequent discovery of Sub and Dom natures in the women came across as, 'Well, that's life, sometimes', and it works in the story. I don't understand readers who nit pick about some specific element they don't like and let that one thing overshadow everything they did like. There are certain topics I myself don't like, but if you write them well and they fit in your story? Sure I may ask you to leave them out in a future story so they don't disrupt my "enjoyment while reading" ;-), but I'm not going to mark you down for it. Anyway, well done and now I have to go back and give you a 5 for each part. :-D

that was quite the ending lots of surprises, Good Job rawly, looking forward to reading more!

I Loved it, I'm going to check now what else she has written, and hope in the future there is a continuance of mom & gwen, this is deff a 5 star from me, Very Good........

🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 Though the story was very hot, I still agree with Anonymous that the pregnancy was stupid with all the precautions available today even if Gwen was being stubborn. But then without Chris pumping all his spunk in her and knocking her up, the story would have lost much of its eroticism. Well done.