All Comments on 'Nomad Ch. 05'

Story is pretty good but, like so many other mediocre writers, fame is just around the corner. I think not. Finish the story or get off literotica. You’re not that good Bub.

Well, first of all, “anonymous” is an asshole.

Second, the story is interesting, I feel involved with the characters, and I hope you’re continuing to write.

Please finish this story. I would love to read your finish

Got caught up in your characters.

Left wanting for more of a conclusion that situations had implied revenge.

Is there nihilistic self destruction or redemption and a constructive resolution for a wounded warrior?

Damn, not finished! Well was good while it lasted

Huh?

Judgement out as ok up until quit without finishing. Then went to dislike.

Should have checked comments before reading especially and then the last.

The last post was over a year ago! Is this an abandoned series?

I was enjoying the story and it just stops!

Please finish the series?

Your Nomad story is good, thanks for taking the time!

Interesting choice of pseudo names “Waif”. It suits your purpose. At 75 I understand your preoccupation with Nam and the Sand Box. My brother is dying of cancer because of that place. I am dying because of a different cancer but a cancer nonetheless.

Your writing does a good job of keeping it real. Everything is not always black and white, most all the time it fades into a blur of muted colors that everyone translates through their own filter to keep life safe and sane. Find peace my friend. J

Is this ever going to end???

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Are still above ground???

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