All Comments on 'Not a Beautiful Woman Ch. 10'

Good job overall. The story was good but you were building a story then you ended it abruptly. What happened to the master / slave relationship? How did Tom accept Eli so easily knowing his involvement in her movies and gangbangs? It's implied that she overcame her addiction to gangbangs, but did she really? She was so conflicted between Eli and Tom and then suddenly she cuts Eli off sexually after breaking up with Tom and doesn't have sex for seven years? After all that happened they just became a regular vanilla husband and wife? A little hard to believe.

Anyway overall it was good. I wish there were more questions answered.