All Comments on 'Not a Sub'

by Jeahmi

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Ton8tyTon8tyover 14 years ago
A Delightful Appetizer...

...now, where's the beef? You absolutely must continue this story line. The characters are interesting and the premise is compelling. This wonderful beginning has the potential to go any of a number of directions. Don't keep us waiting long for the next installment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Love this story!!!!

I can't believe you haven't finished this story in two years it's so hot! I love the story line please finish it! :)

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