All Comments on 'Not a Thing to Wear'

https://xarthwritesthings.wordpress.com/2019/04/12/not-a-thing-to-wear/

A few notes on the story are available at the above link, as I've been making a habit of. Since it's actually not as easy to find as I assumed it would be, here's a link to the other stories in the event.

https://www.literotica.com/s/on-the-job-story-challenge-story-list

Thanks for reading

-X

The story was really kind of sweet. I can picture them developing a very successful somewhat unusual relationship. Thanks.

I love reading this kind of story. Long detail and very exciting 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍. I hope you continue.

Sexy girl and her totally(?) straight bff. Hmmm...I don't think this story 's done yet. *****

This is the first of your stories I have read. Your very good at forming a story.

Your first link https://xarthwritesthings.wordpress.com/2019/04/12/n ot-a-thing-to-wear/ was off a little, should have been https://xarthwritesthings.wordpress.com/.

Anyway great job, looking forward to a future story of this pair.

I guess my links got broken with spaces inserted in them. I hope that hasn't been happening every time I drop links in the comments :(

The problem with only linking to my blog's front page is as soon as I write a new post, the link to the commentary for the particular story won't make sense anymore.

https://xarthwritesthings.wordpress.com/2019/04/12/not-a-thing-to-wear/

I'll try that again, but for all I know it gets edited on me. My comments have apparently been going through a waiting period on submission lately, and it might be because I'm throwing links in them.

Beautiful. Except Jules should have.... Naw, just shitting you 6 stars.

The way you portrayed Riley's nervousness and Bree finding a very little inner Domme, and the banter with Julie. None of it was over the top, and I read your blog and you said it wasn't as long as normal. I wish it was much longer, the way you have started to develop the characters, I would love to see the first real date and beyond. Cheers

Not gonna lie...you had me at nakey...

great pacing, loved the feelings being played out. Thanks for sharing!

You have a way with plot in the short period, the story never felt unrealistic for a moment. Also, apart from the " 's okay ", it seemed another style of writing from the one you usually display in the taboo category.

Anyway, always a pleasure reading you, keep it up please!

Definitely 6 stars, if I could rate that high. I *really* hope you write sequels!

what a great scenario. I really felt a good sense of the characters. The writing and dialouge was well done. I hope it wins.

I loved that story .. now I want a sequel !! That was awesome

not that i know how hot hell is, but this story was absolute turn on. you are quickly becoming my favorite erotic writer. thank you. ever so sexy and easy to read.

wow

I don't have a special interest in this topic, but I read this story because of the author's prior work. It did not disappoint. Besides his usual well-fleshed out characters and snappy dialog, the atmosphere here was truly captivating - I felt like I'd just witnessed someone meet their soul mate and I became truly invested in seeing their relationship succeed. I rarely wish for a follow up chapter - I don't like or read multi chapter stories, and I certainly don't want to be disappointed by finding out that things didn't go as I'd hoped. I'd make a rare exception for this story.

Love it. Shows how strong, natural and funny dialogue really makes a story fizz.