All Comments on 'Not All Mine'

....refreshing style... excellent story line.... truly erotic....

I have to admit...I was only looking for a quick wank story tonight. But I was drawn in to your tale, needing to know more about the motivations behind what was happening, and was especially impressed with the conversation between Zach and John after the main action. You left this open to be a continuation, but I'm not sure it should be. Good stuff. 5 stars.

This is a great story! Please continue with a sequel and develop it more. Not necessary for the John and his wife to be converted to the free swinging lifestyle, if you do not want to. In fact you may consider a story line that such a libertine teacher will have wrong effect on children.........