All Comments on 'Not Always As They Appear Ch. 02'

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Charlene99Charlene99over 2 years ago

You have written a most wonderful story. More please .Romance yet to come I hope.

5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Quite enjoyable.

Well written piece. Takes the reader into the story very well. Iliked it alot. My preference is for more description of Alex's clothing.

mumblegooseeggmumblegooseeggover 8 years ago
To be continued?

Your intro to this chapter suggested that there might be more. Five years later, give or take a month: not yet, apparently. On the one hand, I can understand: your story is essentially complete. On the other, I am a sucker for romantic love stories, especially involving transgender people, so I'd love a sequel or another story or something to show off your talent for writing the kind of tales I prefer. What about it?

BTW, I tracked down Not Always As They appear from a comment you made on a recent story. No good deed goes unpunished....

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
please continue

Beautiful story, sincere and sweet, hope you finish it.

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