All Comments on 'Not an Ordinary Teacher'

This is pretty good, but you need to slow it down, savor the punishment and move more deliberately. Let the characters develop the story, instead of having the narrator do so. If you take more time, the climax will be more satisfying for everyone - teacher, student, the reader, & the author!

Keep writing!

Well, thank you. I'll keep it in mind next time!

There were some grammatical errors that distracted me a little, but I really did like the story. You have some nice potential there.

enjoyed the scenario and your passion. I would enjoy seeing some extra detail and more buildup but great start...Keep it coming.