All Comments on 'Not Bible Camp Ch. 04'

Excellent story.

/If you aren't going to finish the series, you might as well not waste people's time by leaving it up to read....

So sad this is the last chapter published. So much intrigue and so many possibilities!

Great series. Hurry up and write the next chapter. When is Counselor Jameson going to show him the rewards of self control for real? (Of course only after a few miserable embarrassing attempts in the simulator and then finally in person.) Then Chris will be ready for Jill. Nice choice of scriptures and guilty doubts about morality.