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Please refrain from posting stuff which was written while deep into LSD! Keep it, if you are still proud of it after you regain more normal use of neurons, but DON'T post it!

Pictures related to this story are found at glorypair.tumblr.com/ around page 3

It may have technically been written in English, but it was very hard to follow. Your writing style isn't very good.

Don't know why people complained, I understood the intention of your story. An unusual (creative) device to mimic erotic phrases and thoughts lovers stimulate themselves with.

Fun!

pretty good but the broken lines were a bit distracting. otherwise good.d