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All Comments on 'Not in Kansas Ch. 01'

by neruval442

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Too Short

You sucked me into the story and BLAM it ended.

neruval442neruval442almost 4 years agoAuthor
Hope to get back to it eventually :)

Sorry - life kind of overtook me - really hope to get back to this storyline at some point, tho' moving from the internal monologue to mostly narration is going to be a tricky one...

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