All Comments on 'Not in That Way Ch. 05'

Oh man! This is just.... Gosh

OMG , I have been checking in regularly to see an update, because this story has hooked my in completely, Go Team Gabe!

I was worried where is was going at first but wasn’t disappointed at all, please let the boys find their happiness, yeah a few curve balls alongside to road to keep up on the edge of our collective seats, awesome stuff well done ,

Wow!!

Good start, Gabe. Stay the course Dustin. Great chapter thealphamale.

This is so sweet, but the part where Gabe's father left bc he's gay is so sad. I hope Gabe soon realizes that people like that is not worth his time, even if it's his own father.

This is a well written emotional story. It packs a punch and really lets the reader care about the characters.

Crying.

Crying real tears. Thanks though for easing the pain I have had for these guys. I have hope now

Thanks

Nine years is a very long time. But, with boys it isn't. Boys build pressure under the expectations we set for them. Gabe, Dustin? Clearly under pressure. Hopeful that the way they release is positive, affirming. Another great chapter, thealphamale ...

Please. Please. PLEASE tell me this story continues.

Powerful story…

What a nice surprise, I'm glad that my anticipation for how things gonna play out was wrong.

I have actual tears streaming down my face. Able to relate to Gabe’s coming out story. I tried for years to tell my parents I was gay, but whenever I approached it - and began using words that led to gay - my father gave off the “don’t you dare” vibe. I lived in misery for years when it all could have been lifted by a simple conversation. I never came out until after my father died. The timing seemed right then. Another great chapter Alpha.

Your writing conjures up my own experiences of unrequited love. My heart beat faster and my eyes were swelling up. Powerful emotions you captured and described so eloquently.