All Comments on 'Not in That Way Ch. 08'

by thealphamale

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BlowPopJBlowPopJover 2 years ago

Definitely love this ending

MThomasMarkMThomasMarkover 2 years ago

Omg. Bringing it home. I cried. What a rich, beautiful picture you’ve painted of these two, with their separate lives, their lives together, and their families. Bravo.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Thank you for another wonderful story.

readerfeederreaderfeederover 2 years ago

just leaving a comment to say I really enjoyed this story and loved how it unfolded... one of my favourites of yours, along with 'Facing the Frat Boy' and 'Last Months'. Looking forward to what you come up with next!

ImpactSigilImpactSigilover 2 years ago

Absolutely loved this story, especially the pacing in this one has been superb! Well written, looking forward to your future works.

armplasmaarmplasmaover 2 years ago

I'm smiling so big the whole story. This is easily my favorite along with The Chase.

Hutchison12Hutchison12over 2 years ago

Absolutely loved this story from the start, and a perfect ending. Full of hope for there future , thanks.

dnsontndnsontnover 2 years ago

Tender. Kind, loving, hopeful ... and tender. Favorite line? "I settle on the idea that sometimes the only way out is through." Truth. Amen and hallelujah thealphamale. A joyful read. Sexy too ...

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Beautiful story! Very well written and seemed so realistic. I'm going to miss them but I'm so happy for them!

justanotherspectatorjustanotherspectatorover 2 years ago

Beautiful story!

It's a good thing this story turned out to be slow, tender, loving, and not overly dramatic. I don't think most people in real life are willing to go through much drama like stories and novellas make it out to be.

sm1982sm1982over 2 years ago

Love the story and loved Dust and Gabe. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Love the story from start to finish. Loved the interaction with the kids. Awesome supportive family. Thank you

PockettRockettPockettRockettabout 2 years ago

Fantastic story all the way through - I loved every chapter, along with loving that the whole story wasn’t one big sex fest. It was warm and romantic along with being hot. It was a real romance. Great job!

BeefyhungtopguyBeefyhungtopguyalmost 2 years ago

COME ON!!!!!!! MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please XOXO

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Thank you! Wouldn't it be such a treat if many had this connection with their loved ones?? One of my favorite lines, out of many, from this story:

"Gabe's both sides of the same coin, and no matter which way I flip, I'm still winning in the end."

This was such beautifully written. This was not cheaply written nor was it just about sex, but truly about relationships and connections.

Thanks again for the laughter, for the tears, for the pain and joy shared with Gabe and Dust....

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Thank you for such a beautiful, moving and involving story.

It is a superb study in how the fear of loss can erect almost insurmountable barriers to happiness. But you chipped away at those barriers so adroitly that love won out in the end.

I read this story in one shot and found it an emotional and uplifting read. Thank you

CommitmentisntmythingCommitmentisntmythingabout 1 year ago

This was SUCH a beautiful read. Absolutely obsessed with these two. I'll miss them😭

Willman33Willman339 months ago

A truly wonderful story and a truly great storyteller. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Loved this story so well constructed and the characters came alive

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