All Comments on 'Not In This Lifetime Ch. 03-04'

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I know I’m in the minority here, but I’m not reading this story for the sex scenes. The characters and intrigue are what bring me back. I am sad about Cerys’ death, and he’s only had a paragraph written. The general also appears to be more than what he seems. Appreciate the double chapters, as well. The story flows seamlessly from past to present. Well done.

MarcLuciFerMarcLuciFer9 months ago

I'm still processing chapters #3 and #4, so my thoughts are a bit vague. But right now, I'm getting a strong vibe that the relationship between Symond and Mile is going to be a lot like that of Crassus and Antoninus in "Spartacus". That being Mile serving as a personal slave whose sole duties will be to satisfy Symond as his sexual submissive. This is an extremely well written story with great character depictions.

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