All Comments on 'Not In This Lifetime Ch. 05'

Excellent chapter, it captured Symond's dominance and Mile's acceptance of his servitude perfectly. It does make me wonder though, whether Mile's actions were out of his need to be sexual submissive, or does he have a plan for gaining the upper hand over the general by using sex. Can't wait to find out.

Your worry about how well you wrote sex scenes is unfounded. This chapter perfectly portrays the dynamics between Symond and Mile. What the future holds for them remains to be seen.