All Comments on 'Not Just Another Walk in the Park Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
2 Part

Soo it just ends like that? well it doesnt really end actually...

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
5 for your effort

and a 5 for the story, Annony YOU SUCK

PalmTreesandSandPalmTreesandSandover 8 years agoAuthor

This probably should have been one long story instead of broken up in to Chapters. Each chapter probably doesn't stand too well on its on. Again this is my first time at this and I'm learning. Thanks for your comments!

MasterfuljimMasterfuljimover 8 years ago
Good and dark

Just what non con is about.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Not much of a plot. No point in chapters.

jrj8jrj8over 8 years ago
Anons....!

Gotta love em.. hiding their lack of talent behind that word. Do hope you pay no attention to them, keep on typing... More details in the next chapter would be good.. Thanks for writing.. May all your fantasies come true...

FuzznfangsFuzznfangsover 8 years ago
County Attornies...

Counties attornies do not have "clients." Her mom might have to meet with a witness, or a victim, but not a "client."

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