by Tall78701
Dinner has two N's
Dining Room has one "N"
Ever heard of spell check?
Any-Mouse critics are jerks who can't write and can't get it up.
I really didn't notice the mistakes if there were some. I was enjoying the tale.
Really detailed which is something that I like in a WELL WRITTEN story! Two Thumbs up here!
I like sexy stories that give an average day the potential to result in a fun, exciting adventure. Isn't that what many of us do during the doldrums of a day, evening, dinner with friends, etc? Maybe if we just invite the right person to dinner . . .