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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Another pile of garbage from penpal. When are you going to write a believable story?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

All this site needs, another mythical foot lock black cock, a cheating whore wife and a beta cuck. Gee, if only that happened more often. /eyeroll

newmantopleasenewmantopleasealmost 3 years ago

Another emotional thrill ride, loved that he just chose to move on at the end lol!

JoeVerde1JoeVerde1almost 3 years ago

I think you captured the essence of a classic JAP!

ThaDeeThaDeealmost 3 years ago

Good story, good conclusion. Like what you did here. Nice job!

KarenCDFLKarenCDFLalmost 3 years ago

Stopped read a few paragraphs in.

The term Svartse or americanized simply as the name Schwartz translates to Black.

Was never used in the hateful way the N word was.

It was used more to associate a person with black skin.

Growing up in a Jewish family who spoke yiddish and where the term was used, I can attest to this.

For example: Remember General Schwarzkopf? That translates as Black Head.

Please don't try to hide your racism in a story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Silly, racist, and anti-Semitic

Insulting to all!

kennyboy82kennyboy82almost 3 years ago

I loved it! 5* easy award. It was obvious right from the start that Wayne was Grade 'A' cuckold material. His desire for promotion and his having a black boss only confirmed that. Ruthie was always going to fuck Victor to get wayne that promotion, and it was inevitable she would become hooked on BBC, she was a latent black cock slut waiting to be released. The fact that Victor bred her was also inevitable. Wayne only showed he had some balls when he packed his bags and left home.

crimfolkcrimfolkalmost 3 years ago

Great fun - I enjoyed it. Perhaps as much a comedy as erotica but well written as ever from PenPal

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

What a pussy! I am so tired of stories about ‘big black cocks.’ And white women who can’t get enough at their mans expense. More stories about men who ruin their cheating slurs‘a lives

PenPal2001PenPal2001almost 3 years agoAuthor

@Anonymous "What a pussy...": If you're "so tired of stories about 'big black cocks'" you should avoid the Interracial Love section. If you prefer stories about modestly endowed black men and virtuous, faithful white women you should look elsewhere.

JustplainjeffJustplainjeffalmost 3 years ago

There is so much wrong with this its truly sad. When a woman announces she's pregnant, people say Mazel Tov, or congratulations. Circumcision is the covenant with God. If you don't have a clue about a religion, ASK SOMEONE, don't spout inaccuracies!

charliem100charliem100almost 3 years ago

The boss banging an employee's wife scenario is fairly common, but one I always enjoy. My problem with this one is I don't like the husband being humiliated.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

My wife found this, and we both enjoyed it tremendously. We won't comment about whether it was anti-Semitic or racist because we simply don’t know. However, the story was well-written and extremely erotic. We both enjoyed seeing a bossy, dominate, spoiled ‘princess’ wife get dominated by big black cock. It kind of served her right for being so arrogant.

My wife is a petite, 90-pound, white, blond, blue-eyed gal who always celebrates when other white wives go black. She applauded when “Ruthie” got blacked. My wife got her first black cock on our honeymoon in the Caribbean, and she has not slowed down since. She could not cum on my 3-inch, pencil-thin dick but she came all night on his BBC. In fact, I could not go deep enough to break her hymen, but he easily popped her cherry.

When you have a package like mine it is easy to just naturally fall into the role of a willing cuckold. Especially when I see her, and her AAA-cup tits, bouncing up and down on an Alpha black man. I already got a vasectomy; however, the more I see her with black guys, the more I realize I should go ahead and just be castrated.

Of course, my wife wants to be black bred. I can’t wait to see if her tiny tits grow into B-cups, as they fill out with milk for her cute, little black babies.

Nice story!

octabrainoctabrainalmost 3 years ago

Lovely story, but too short. Would love to read about other white wives from Victor's harem.

cardinalfancardinalfanalmost 3 years ago

I've always enjoyed your stories. This one probably wouldn't go at the top of the list like Sisters Misters but it was enjoyable. Hope to see more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I think if you could have made Ruth a smoker it could have been more appealing. Maybe add it if you make a second chapter

ImSickImSickalmost 3 years ago

Nice I'm always happy to see a new story posted by my favorite writer please keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Love to hate them! None of the characters are especially lovable, but the interaction, the humor and the sex makes it a fun read.

mandy3514mandy3514almost 3 years ago

Quite a fun little romp. I liked that the cuckolded husband had enough at the end and took off. Not many of these stories end that way.

NVDiceGuyNVDiceGuyabout 2 years ago

5 easy! The ending made it 10 worthy. I like your works but usually the husband has no balls at the end. This was a great scenario.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

wonder how she reacted to the letter. any chance you could put another chapter detailing how she did?

Hornydevil47Hornydevil47about 1 year ago

Justplainjeff says that circumcision is a covenant between man and God, why the hell would God make man in his own image and then want man to desecrate the body he /she /it gave man. Just shows what a total load of bollocks religion is. It has caused millions of people's deaths over the centuries. Politicians are the next worst thing we have on this planet. There would be no war's if their negotiations had to be made in the middle of a battlefield. Thank you for your story, I thought it was well written and really enjoyed it. Mel B known as Hornydevil47

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

HIlarious, the wife and lover thought he was a schlemiel (aka 'loser'), but his letter basically marked her as a klafte (nasty bitch) or Victor as a schmuck or even scheckle (contemptuous and a dick). I wonder how they would get along together as an enforced couple with him the responsible papa? My first wife was half Jewish and I learned some Yiddish from her estimable mother as a fount of that lexicon. Shalom wasn't meant as a salutation "peace" here, but "so long, will be waiting for the divorce lawyer". The only peace involved was the husband wanting his serenity back, like an old woman who tells the loud neighbor teen "Peace!" as in 'I want peace and quiet'. Enjoyed that appropriate ending.

PenPal2001PenPal20017 months agoAuthor

To Anonymous "Hilarious", Thanks for your insightful comment. Educational too for those with little exposure to Yiddish. This story was not as well-received as most of my others, but I think that's largely because many readers did not appreciate the humor.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I'm Jewish and grew up in Scarsdale, NY, the horizon was limited for me, yes I screwed but only with Jewish fellows. Once I got in to Syracuse things changed. There's a big Jewish contingent from my town there so I was very discreet sexually with respect to black guys, every single one of them that I gave a blowjob to or fucked had bigger cock than my old boyfriends. I married an Orthodox man for money.

PenPal2001PenPal20016 months agoAuthor

To Anonymous I'm Jewish,

Thanks for the comment. I love to get a little backstory from readers inspired by my story. You should write your own story and post it on Literotica/.

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